I watched the whole video and..... I totally do NOT understand the product. Perhaps it's because of the 'voice' and then potential customers may react negatively as it sounds evil...
When the phone came out, the globe appeared on the screen.... and the teacher now can 'teach'? Why?
The features of the product are not there, how do we find the product (not web address, FB page, etc). Who are your potential customers (if they are teachers, they will not buy an 'evil' sounding product.
Not very good, I'm afraid, this commercial is still in the 'Developing' level.
Guys,
ReplyDeleteI watched the whole video and..... I totally do NOT understand the product. Perhaps it's because of the 'voice' and then potential customers may react negatively as it sounds evil...
When the phone came out, the globe appeared on the screen.... and the teacher now can 'teach'? Why?
The features of the product are not there, how do we find the product (not web address, FB page, etc). Who are your potential customers (if they are teachers, they will not buy an 'evil' sounding product.
Not very good, I'm afraid, this commercial is still in the 'Developing' level.